Descriptive Text Annette Aprielle X5/03

 MY FRIEND 


My friend name is Amelinda Rahardjo. She is from X4. She lives in Surabaya and she is a student  from santa maria senior high school. Her age is fifteen years old now and she was born at nine of  February two thousand and nine. We were at the same school since the elementary and also junior  high school. She have a round face with some kind of bob hair. Her hair and eyes color are the same  which is black. She also has a mole at her upper lips and she also wears glasses. She has a fair skin  and her height is tall like a standard girl height.  

Her personality is very good, she always smile almost all the time and she was very kind to me when  we first meet. Sometimes we share stories together at the morning before the bell school is ringing  She is very friendly to many people so that the people will be comfortable when they are with Amel.  So now she has a lot of friend in X4. She also likes to be a model since she was a child or taking a  picture of herself and upload it in the instagram. She is very smart and she always get a good grades.  She also likes to take picture especially the skies and something that she finds interesting. She has an  amazing voice so she now joins Voice Of Sanmarian or VOS. Since she was at junior high school she  also likes to singing so she also joins Santa Clara Choir or SCC and wins some achievement.




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