Descriptive Text Aline X5/05

Hii there!!

This text contains a simple description of one of my acquaintances who i met by chance, soo let's get started

Evelyn, that's the name her friends call her, she is a 7th grade student at Santa Maria high School in Surabaya, she comes from Babat a beautiful town in East Java, but since she's started studied in Surabaya, to move and start her new life in the city, at first she felt a little nervous about moving to this big city, moving from a place she had known since childhood to a city that was much more crowded and busy was certainly not a easy thing, however evelyn has a cheerful and adaptable personality, so she quickly met a new friends at school, Evelyn had long straight Black hair a round face with her warm and friendly impression, despite this, her look is  often simple, yet she always looks fresh and cheerful, being quite tall for her age, at school, Evelyn was known as a student who always smile and friendly to everyone, whatever it was classmates, teachers even school staff, she always polite, she's also active in extracurricular and other activity in school👀👀

*I lost the photo, sorry :((
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Komentar

Dishine/09 mengatakan…
Nice job! You used well words and interesting content. I want to see the picture! :D
Alice9a03 mengatakan…
Splendid work! Your choice of words are great and you described everything really well. Really hope you could add a picture next time but overall looks great! :DDD
Clarissa Joana Wangasal mengatakan…
WOW, your description about your friend is very good. You describe all about your friend and it is very interesting. The structure of your descriptive text is also good.
Good job Aline !!!
Alexein mengatakan…
Beautiful writingg, You described her so well and includes a lot of information. Would be nice to add some pictures next time but its awesome! I love your writings and choices of words

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